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Hi !

This is a (bad) translation of a game aid I had write one year ago. This is a timeline of the universe based on the different chronological informations contained in books. I have set only the dates which can be established with some confidence.

I hope the translation is good enough to be understandable. Do not hesitate to give me errors, I would amend the text accordingly.

Here is the doc :gh_soe_simplified_chronology.pdf

iz

Very handy!

Wonderful, answers some questions I had. Thanks!

You are welcome. Just the point with the tarish people arrival. With beginning the game aid in the french section I have re-check and nothing in book can fix it : on narrator said they know when, but nobody give a year :'s

Because Tarish descriptions suggest they are long gone we believe plausible an arrival before oath, on Créag, so. No certitude yet :'s

iz

Thanks for this.

Do you want errors in English pointed out? I don't want to offend.

Of course I want ! I know it is quite dirty as translation. I do my best but... hum

Point errors, you are welcome. After all, it is you who will use it.

iz

with its religious equivalent in brackets,

Founding of the Guild of varigals

Estimated apex of a cold period.

Clan rebels

plunder the south of Tri-Kazel

the rebels are finally

a particularly icy winter for hunting, mountaineers take refuge

Passes remain closed

isolation claims more

Famine spreads gradually and is named

Disappearance of King

the coldest year.

the first plague,

living in deprived conditions

die in the space

are undertaken

water to each

Magience arrives

where it gradually makes itself (known? Important? Not sure what you want to say)

manages to cross

coastal Gwidrites

Temple begin

and tangible hostility

many die

manage to preserve

fans - followers?

in Reizh Magience.

for weeks a horde of

a relic of Gwidre

present themselves

hit the Feondas hard and are listened to

called the Magnaminous?

Witnessing

bringing hope

he collaborates

building of the

Tri-Kazel - the

Deoir overflow and engulf

yields

whom he entrusts

back in Osta

is struck by the cities' magnificent reconstruction and it is declared

kingdom. The royal family is moved

flee for fear of execution

crashes in the middle

causes a huge

are banned

Alberich faces

is found

is built

war on Reizh

Gwidre suffer heavy

estimated apex of

Sorry I didn't think it would be so long or I would have mailed you. I'm writing live not on a desktop. There are some errors in capitalisation but I have left them for you. Most of the errors are due to switching tenses. Since your first entry is in present tense, I have edited the rest to be like that.

Btw please know I have the utmost respect for your English, I barely speak French!

Yes, present is good. After all it's a chronology, only facts. I don't understand : what about capitalisation ? I learned there are few time that punctuation rules are different between the French and English. So I think if I make these mistakes, it comes from a misunderstanding of a point rules.

Now I'm short of time to edit the text but i will do asap. Thanks a lot !

iz